The Unnamed W book
The Unnamed W book Or Why Editing is Important There was a third "W" book I read for the alphabet challenge. I have chosen not to mention the title or the author's name. The reason for this is the many editing and formatting issues in the book. It was not self-published. But it did go through a small press. The issues were so bad that I started marking them, circling them, and making notes as I read the story. They distracted me to the point that the story suffered, and, really, it's too bad, because it had potential to be good. I will create my own examples of the errors to give you an idea of what NOT to do and what to look for when you are going through the Galley Proofs. Issue one: Punctuation. Jack and Jill are talking. "Hi, Jack," Jill said. "Hi, Jill, where are you going?" "To the store." When you read this, who is talking? Jill. Now, why would Jill talk to herself? Is she carrying on a conversation with Jack, becaus...