Editing

Editing The more I write, the more I learn about editing and how important it is. This is a story about my editing journey. With Book Two of The Secrets Cafe trilogy available for purchase and Book One already out, I am editing, polishing, and cleaning up Book Three, "Secrets Cafe, Just Desserts." Round one was going through all the suggested edits and ideas my writer's group gave me. Once I completed that, it was on to round two, grammar, punctuation, and continuity. I was rolling along fine, everything coming together nicely, and then ... chapter three. Dun, dun, duh ... The first thing I noticed was that the chapter read flat. The second thing was it was way too long, almost thirty pages! That one was an easy fix. I knew right where to split the chapters. I also knew I could go through the pages, clean it up, trim the unnecessary, and spice up the rest. A lot was happening in the chapter, and it needed to cover four days. But something else was off. I couldn't p...